Roo 2

Okay! I just posted on your chapter one without reading this and I said that you might want a little bit before the story gets going to get to know ...

Ooh. This sounds very very interesting! So far, it's very original and unique, which---in a time where everything seems to have already been written---is a difficult thing to have. So, ...

Okay, so, I don't think this actually counts as a review, but I just wanted to let you know that so far---if you can make this non-Twilight-y---it sounds very promising. ...

Ahh, gorgeous!! (I feel sort of like when you watch a chick-flick nd afterward you look at girlfriends all teary-eyed and go "Kee-yuuute!" If you know what I'm talking about, ...

((Okay, so this is stellar-short, I know, but more is coming very soon. If you feel like this is too short to critique, I won't be mad if you wait ...

Okay, okay, you're off to a good start! :D So far I'm really really liking your style and writing pattern, and you stay pretty much consistent with your voice which ...

Pretty, sweet, simple: I liked it! For one thing, you seem to have mastered these two characters' dialog, it sounds easy, natural. That's hard to do. Also, you have a ...

Hi, my name is Roo. I actually joined a while ago, but this is the first time I'm actually doing anything about it... :D Um. Well, I'm 15, and currently ...